The overall feedback for my previous elevator pitch was positive, which really stood out to me. People liked the pitch and what I was offering. The only thing I received that I could improve on is the opening line, which stood out to me since I don't usually receive constructive criticism on my assignments. I didn't think any of the comments were silly or wrong.
I edited the opening line of my pitch. I removed calling out Uber and Lyft. Everything else remained the same.
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